Some people feel that sharing information is good, while others think that details needa to be secret.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
According to some, it is important to keep some data secret in such realms as business, science and academe, while others demand that all sorts of information should be openly accessible for anyone. Below, both views will be discussed from a personal standpoint.
There are several reasons why some people might argue that no information that plays a role in the development of society should be a secret. Firstly, there is evidence to support the idea that imparting information is the basis of progression. In the history, no scientist or genius concealed their findings, but rather passed them on to the next generation lest people waste time discovering what already done. Secondly, it may create a more convenient ambiance for businessmen, scientists, and academics to interact and swap ideas with each other if all relevant facts are known to them.
In spite of the above arguments, I support the view that it is not fair to share publicly the information achieved with extreme difficulties. The more reliable intellectual property rights (IPR), the more encouraged to innovate people are. Hence it would be reasonable to protect innovations by copyrights or patents, because this incentivizes people to work harder to discover something new. Obviously, if anyone can have access to their such valuable information free of charge, very few people will struggle to contribute to the development of certain domains. This per se is the main and enough reason for preventing some information from being taken for granted.
In conclusion, however much, it seems to be against development, protection of some information is actually the major incentive for people to learn and discover more.
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actually, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25182481752 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89521892266 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64598540146 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0367079868 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.916666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262028477248 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853696353349 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622273613573 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165276365448 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604520355421 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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