Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter in connection with request for company to you regarding construction of factory in the park street.
This residential area is renowned on account of its serenity and tranquility in the town. Owing to this a library has been established by you a couple of years ago, and hundreds of visitors visit the library on regular basis to read. If the factory will be constructed all of them would be highly disturbed.
Since company has been thinking to establish the factory at the South end of the road all inhabitats including me will suffer while computing as pathway will be less broadened. It is extremely difficult to access the market, bus stop from the opposite side.
I on behalf of all the dwellers of my locality would like to request you to let the company abandon the plan of construction. It would not only be helpful to maintain peace in the surroundings but also save us from commuting issues.
I hope you will address this concern at the earliest.
Yours faithfully,
Maria Roy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 142, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is a library has been established by you a couple of years ago, and hundreds of v...
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Line 5, column 236, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t the library on regular basis to read. If the factory will be constructed all of ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85474860335 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75528324873 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63687150838 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.231470019 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214805310603 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787914104169 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062765393869 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115150265686 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643858455245 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.