Some people feel that the legal age at which people can marry should be at least 21. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Marriage is considered a sacred relation which is a union of not only two people but of families. Marriage comes with many obligations and responsibilities. Thus, some people have a notion that there should be a legal age of marriage. Now, I partially concur with the statement.
To begin with, marriage is an auspicious ceremony wherein people promise each other to live together for the entire life, and the appropriate age for marriage is the monumental factor owing to myriad reasons. Firstly, marriage at the age of 21 is the pertinent decision because, at this age, people become mentally and physically capable to cope with various unanticipated problems. Secondly, maturity, sense of responsibility and understanding come with an age, which are the most significant factors for the successful marriage, and at the age of 21, people get it due to experiences. For instance, it has been found in many surveys that people who are getting married at the age of 21, they have a more successful and good married life.
On the other side, the imposition of legal age can never be a viable option on account of a plethora of reasons. Firstly, marriage depends completely on understanding, rather than age therefore if an individual is getting married before the age of 21 then an individual never gets distracted from his or her goal, as he or she gets emotional support by wife and husband. On top of that, if the people get married at an early age then they are more competent to adjust themselves according to the situation and they can have a better understanding and bonding between each other.
In conclusion, I concede that marriage should be done at an appropriate age so that people should be able to handle situations effectively, as marriage brings myriad responsibilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 290.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03103448276 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98588833214 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544827586207 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.0004340263 50.4703680194 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.583333333 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.9669160288 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.25397266985 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333812911611 0.242375264174 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137273792973 0.0925447433944 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784451204067 0.071462118173 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207655376349 0.151781067708 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378552047498 0.0609392437508 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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