Some people think that the modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Technology has utterly altered human’s lifestyle which in turn resulted in profound impact on people's interaction. Furthermore, Technology has made people to live away from real world and has confined them to a limited world of imaginary things. Although, some opine that advent of technology has made them more sociable, while others contradict it. Therefore, I am going to shed some light over both the views.
To begin with, technology has changed the mode of communication wherein some people find it more beneficial to socialize more with others due to manifold reasons. Firstly, advent of technology has made it possible for the human being to connect and keep up relation with someone at any part of the world, thus narrowed the gap of communication between people. Secondly, some people, sometimes, find it difficult to share their emotions and feelings before someone, but technology has made it possible for them to interact with others conveniently. For instance, giant social networking site Facebook, a place where billions of people connect together, has enabled people to talk and share problems with like-minded people.
However, technology has brought many hurdles in the way of people for making them more sociable, consequently they are now less sociable on account of multifarious reasons. Firstly, youngsters are now feel more comfortable to talk with someone by technology as compare to real interaction, which make them incompetent in terms of soft skills, confidence and so on. Secondly, many people are coming under the trap of various fatal ailments such as obesity and many more, due to over-utilization of technology for doing interaction with someone, which is again the major cause for not making them more sociable because they have adopted sedentary lifestyle. To illustrate, It has been found in many surveys that youngsters are lacking in soft skills, and hence losing confidence before someone, which in turn make them incapable to handle any situation.
In conclusion, technology exhibits many advantages, which have been accompanied with certain disadvantages, therefore human should use it in a best way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: felt
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ages, therefore, human should use it in a best way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 31.9359605911 175% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1207.87684729 148% => OK
No of words: 330.0 242.827586207 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4303030303 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 3.92707691288 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92719116519 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 139.433497537 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551515151515 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 379.143842365 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2592727138 50.4703680194 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4285714286 7.25397266985 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27323236878 0.242375264174 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104471808526 0.0925447433944 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751265161538 0.071462118173 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150323393022 0.151781067708 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804663819215 0.0609392437508 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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