Some believe that lot of scientific research is a waste of time and money To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Some believe that lot of scientific research is a waste of time and money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's era, research is the one of the significant facets which has changed the fate of many countries. The research on various life changing topics is the result of sheer determination and hard work of impeccable work of scientists. However, many opine that scientific research is merely a waste of time and money. I completely disagree with this statement.

To begin with, the image of modern world can never be possible without the contribution of many researches. The world can never move ahead, if there will not be any research. Hence, scientific research has brought many unprecedented changes for the welfare of humankind. Firstly, earlier, there were myriad fatal viruses, and diseases, which acted as a curse for humankind as a result many people were dying owing to several epidemics, but with the arrival of accurate scientific researches, all the dangerous epidemics have been eradicated to a large extent, and thereby these researches prove as a boon for humankind. Secondly, the research contributes immensely in providing different essential tools and machinery which in turn indirectly make any country developed in this world of competition. For instance, it has been found that America spent a major portion of its economy on scientific research, on account of which, it is known as a super power.

Meanwhile, every research is an outcome of intense practice and patience, which is ensured by the hard-work of scientists. Furthermore, It will be unfair to talk about money and time, when it comes to research because research is necessary for any country to be more innovative, and for providing lavish lifestyle to the people and the things which were seemed implausible now have become a common sight for the people due to myriad inventions. Therefore, it is completely an appropriate to invest money on research and researches are deemed as a cure of many intractable problem which signifies that no research means no development in any aspect of area.

In conclusion, I opine that every country should focus on research and innovation, as it ultimately brings humongous fruitful outcomes in people's life.

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Average: 8.2 (39 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20307692308 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85927784982 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584615384615 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0557671378 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9444444444 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0555555556 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183348981729 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650340349695 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065071205648 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112648460129 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05389325647 0.056905535591 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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