TPO 06_ Integrated Writing
The passage is mainly concerned about the online encyclopedias. The author of the passage sees that the traditional printed encyclopedias is superior to the contemporary communal ones. In his argument, he states three evidences that mainly formed his. however, in the lecture, the speaker tackles everyone of these evidences and refutes them one by one, saying that the online encyclopedias are much better than the traditional ones.
First, the passage mentions that the contributors to the contemporary online encyclopedias don't always have adequate academic knowledge, and so, they may be inaccurate in their contributions. On the other hand, the lecturer states that even the traditional encyclopedias are not error-free. Also, he states that if someone searches only for an encyclopedia that has no error, he will never find one. however, in case of the online ones, the errors are easily corrected, and this gives advantage for them compared to the traditional ones.
Second, the passage discusses that even if the information in the online encyclopedias are correct, they are prone to be fabricated or deleted by hackers. In contrast, the speaker says that there exists a solution for this problem and it is that the important information are usually put in special formats to protect them from these malicious acts. In other words, the indisputable information are always protected from hackers and are not susceptible for such fabrications.
Lastly, the passage states that the communal encyclopedias tackle topics that are not really important in very deep details that the reader might be confused and thinks that this information is important. however, the lecturer says this is actually an advantage of the online encyclopedias. that is, the traditional encyclopedias don't include some information just because the limited space they are constrained by. Nevertheless, the unlimited space that the online encyclopedias have gives them the advantage of focusing on very diverse kinds of topics, which is not the case in the traditional ones.
To recapitulate, the passage states three disadvantages of the online encyclopedias (the knowledge of the contributors, the possibility of fabrication and the tackling of trivial topics). The lecturer however, refutes these evidences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, lastly, may, nevertheless, really, second, so, in contrast, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.4613686534 191% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 22.412803532 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1948.0 1373.03311258 142% => OK
No of words: 353.0 270.72406181 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51841359773 5.08290768461 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13071024086 2.5805825403 121% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 145.348785872 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467422096317 0.540411800872 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 634.5 419.366225166 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.55342163355 116% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 16.0 8.23620309051 194% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 2.5761589404 272% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5387723445 49.2860985944 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.588235294 110.228320801 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7647058824 21.698381199 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88235294118 7.06452816374 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.8541721854 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.0289183223 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.2367328918 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 63.6247240618 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.2008830022 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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