Some people believe that school children should not given homework by their teacher, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion
In today's world, it is become a controversial topic that many people trusted that students are not given homework by their teacher or others assumption that homework have a significant role in the education children. Some might have a little knowledge about the benefits and drawback of both views or do not have opportunity to prove their opinion. While some still followed case if homework was influential in education. Both sides will be discussed, carefully
On the one hand, to support that children is not needed to be given homework from their teachers that had several advantages to children. Firstly, children are able to learn other skills after school. They get improve another skills and recess their brain. After the student did that activity which increase enthusiasm at leisure time, their brain refreshed. That produces more productive student at school
Secondly, usually children spend their time for doing homework together in course or completed by group study in class. That establishes children not to become independent student in next education. Such as in university because in future, education consult is more over independent practice with softskill which is able to be studied after school. In term the balance of to take advantage time after school without homework with maximizing learn at school form succesful children
On other hand, when children waste their time did homework that had negative impact to increase laziness. Children might get stuck to search another material except subject on their homework. That was made their knowledge stuck and tired such as Math subject
To sum up, personally I do not agree that homework become important way which influenced students were better in education. I prefer school which from succesful children without giving homework. That was the best opportunity to student for stimulating their brain which help think clear and found their own method to improve the intelligence independently. However it depends parents decision to choose the school curriculum before entered their children with adapted benefit without giving homework or still agree if homework have big role in children education
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 230, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ducation. Such as in university because in future, education consult is more over indepen...
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Line 15, column 358, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...improve the intelligence independently. However it depends parents decision to choose t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1850.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39358600583 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60863713799 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521865889213 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9898103327 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.625 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392032554595 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138358821819 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860218896494 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232046915466 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542069392431 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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