Topic: In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility.
What are your opinion on this? (SalMon_sampleanswer)
Apart from those who are born with silver spoons in their mouth, there are many children who commit to paid jobs at an early age. While some people hold firmly to the belief that it is to the benefit of the children as they accumulate experience and lifetime lessons throughout working process, I profoundly disagree with this fact for specific reasons.
One can not argue certain advantages that early working brings about. By getting access to money through hard work, children will soon develop their materialistic appreciation, hence they will know how to pay properly. For example, they will r...
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Sentence: However, from my personal view, it may yield more negative than positive results on children, which indicates that they should postphone working for cash until fully mature
Error: postphone Suggestion: postpone
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Sentence Length SD: 8.137 7.5
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