you have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect.
Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter
correct the information in the article
explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information
suggest what the magazine should do about this situation
Dear Sir,
I am writing this email to express my annoyance due to the incorrect information shared in your magazine about my town.
To be presize, the incorrect sentence was in the last article on page 20. The last sentence stated that my town has 25 museums while in fact it has 50 museums. The correct number is approximately double the number mentioned in your article.
It is unacceptable for a well-known and an international magazine to share information without reviewing it by your journalists. Many tourists from the whole world are visiting my town and this incorrect information will greatly affect the tourism in my town.
I would appreciate it if you correct this information in your next edition and even on your facebook page to solve the situation.
Yours faithfully,
Nourhan Magdi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, while, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 695.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 134.0 206.0 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18656716418 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.40232815919 3.78020617076 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92454488732 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 127.690721649 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634328358209 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.489128722 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.875 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289140112209 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11859163959 0.0766984524023 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690014094314 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172216948704 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572997638093 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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