During the past year, the channel company has devoted the late night show to national affairs and consequently, Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this time period, most of the complaints received from viewers were concerned without the station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, local businesses that used to advertise during our late-night news program have just canceled their advertising with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to the program and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should restore the time devoted to weather and local news to its former level.
In the earlier days, people used to forecast weather using their natural instinct looking towards the sky. they did it good enough for longer prediction of summer, monsoon or winter. but their ability were constrainted to forcast for very near future. Accuracy for forcasting weather for next three days were hard problem for our ansestors. Rise of industrialization and scientific innovation lead us to increase efficieny of prediction. However, it was useless until it reached to mass media, which was first achieved by newspaper. which was followed by its successer, radio. Currently, we are living in the third and the forth generation of mass media communication of television and internet.
Nowadays, internet has become the primary medium for gathering information of our surrounding news. but many people still prefer television for their daily dose of news. The working class people tend to reach home at evening. after the long boring day of work, they like to spent their time on some entertainment show which lighten their mood instead of news. Because no one likes to jump into some serious matter just after a long day. this only keep the late night window open for the news. time after the lunch is the perfect slot to offer people the updates about their next day of work whether they will require umbrella or warm sweater to keep their body protected.
However, instead of giving updates for the following day, news channels diverted their attention of coverage from the weather report and local news to the national concerns. people don't bother to have updates of the nation before their own local surrounding. it resulted in the decrement of the viewers of the news channel. And which in effect, it had affected our contarcts of advertising with the local business. Why will anyone even will to pay for advertising if the business don't get enough attention or grow their sales.
To avoid any further cut in revenue, the necessary steps must be taken to get back the viewers attention to the news channel. The changes made in the one year period should be reverted back to original, from concentrating on national news to the local news and the weather report. this will bring back the lost patrons who had shifted to the other news channel according to their needs. reverting back the changes must be done as soon as possible before the other users starts to leave the channel and our market crashes.
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- During the past year, the channel company has devoted the late night show to national affairs and consequently, Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During thi 23
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Essay evaluation report
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 411 350
No. of Characters: 1971 1500
No. of Different Words: 226 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.503 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.796 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.445 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 132 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 101 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 57 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 34 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 31.615 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 17.865 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.462 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.325 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.574 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.128 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...tural instinct looking towards the sky. they did it good enough for longer predictio...
^^^^
Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...rediction of summer, monsoon or winter. but their ability were constrainted to forc...
^^^
Line 1, column 534, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
... which was first achieved by newspaper. which was followed by its successer, radio. C...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 101, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...ng information of our surrounding news. but many people still prefer television for...
^^^
Line 7, column 227, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...s people tend to reach home at evening. after the long boring day of work, they like ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 438, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...e serious matter just after a long day. this only keep the late night window open fo...
^^^^
Line 7, column 494, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Time
...he late night window open for the news. time after the lunch is the perfect slot to ...
^^^^
Line 13, column 175, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...nd local news to the national concerns. people dont bother to have updates of the nati...
^^^^^^
Line 13, column 182, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...l news to the national concerns. people dont bother to have updates of the nation be...
^^^^
Line 13, column 260, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ion before their own local surrounding. it resulted in the decrement of the viewer...
^^
Line 13, column 481, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... to pay for advertising if the business dont get enough attention or grow their sale...
^^^^
Line 19, column 88, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'viewers'' or 'viewer's'?
Suggestion: viewers'; viewer's
...ary steps must be taken to get back the viewers attention to the news channel. The chan...
^^^^^^^
Line 19, column 282, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... the local news and the weather report. this will bring back the lost patrons who ha...
^^^^
Line 19, column 388, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Reverting
... news channel according to their needs. reverting back the changes must be done as soon a...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, so, still, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.6327345309 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 28.8173652695 97% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 55.5748502994 108% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2035.0 2260.96107784 90% => OK
No of words: 409.0 441.139720559 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97555012225 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50946999135 2.78398813304 90% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 204.123752495 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569682151589 0.468620217663 122% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 705.55239521 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.96107784431 161% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 19.7664670659 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.8473053892 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3771102629 57.8364921388 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7916666667 119.503703932 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0416666667 23.324526521 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.95833333333 5.70786347227 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.25449101796 266% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.20758483034 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206709062742 0.218282227539 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059110226057 0.0743258471296 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669940753991 0.0701772020484 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124971500263 0.128457276422 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591858781976 0.0628817314937 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.3799401198 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.3550499002 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.197005988 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.5979740519 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.32208582834 98% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 98.500998004 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 12.3882235529 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.1389221557 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.