The bar chart depicts regular physical activity done by Australian men and women of various age groups in 2010.
The bar chart depicts regular physical activity done by Australian men and women of various age groups in 2010. According to the bar chart, more than 50% male of age group 15-24 exercise regularly. Male age group 35-44 observe least amount of physical activity. More than 50% of women in the ages between 45-54 exercise on a day-to-day basis. The least percentage of women exercising regularly falls in 25-34 age group with approximately 42%.
Firstly, in every age group, more than 45% women exercise regularly. Age groups 35-44, 45-54 and 55-64 have over 50% of women exercising on a daily basis, with 53.3% in ages 45-54 being the maximum. More percentage of women are seen to be physically exercising than men in every age group with the exception of ages 15 to 24 in which 47.7% of women exercise compared to 52.8% male in the same category.
Secondly, except 15-24 age group, all male age groups have average percentage of less than 50%. The least percent of male exercising is 39.5% in age group 35-44. Highest percent, as discussed, is 52.8% in ages 15-24. Approximately same percentage of Australian men and women exercise regularly from the age of 65, 46.7 % men and 47.1% women.
To summarize, a common trend of more percentage of Australian females are exercising regularly than Australian men. The exception to this trend is observed in the age group of 15-24. In every category, more than 45% of females exercise whereas the percentage of men is generally below 50. Approximately the same percentage of men and women exercise at the age 65 and above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 220, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'observe the least'.
Suggestion: observe the least
...xercise regularly. Male age group 35-44 observe least amount of physical activity. More than ...
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Line 3, column 290, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
... exercising than men in every age group with the exception of ages 15 to 24 in which 47.7% of women e...
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Line 5, column 164, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Highest'.
Suggestion: The Highest
...exercising is 39.5% in age group 35-44. Highest percent, as discussed, is 52.8% in ages...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, secondly, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 965.302439024 135% => OK
No of words: 267.0 196.424390244 136% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88014981273 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63734975353 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.419475655431 0.547539520022 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 407.7 283.868780488 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3657231652 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4375 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6875 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5625 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 4.09268292683 391% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416351943687 0.215688989381 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192586286551 0.103423049105 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.216291289446 0.0843802449381 256% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.3003976932 0.15604864568 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14136701981 0.0819641961636 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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