Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged.
Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete
become more useful adults.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
competition is often misunderstood as rivalry. A proportion of people believe that competition is good and kids should be given exposure to it, while others argue that children should to taught to co-operate to become better humans. In this essay, we will discuss how these two entities affect younger generation and see that a blend of both characteristics is important.
Firstly, teaching children a sense of competition is utmost important to survive in this world, because we see that everywhere from school to job. survival would become difficult without that. As the competition starts from school, it is important for any pup to get grades to get into prestigious university. Next, when a kid participates in a game, they are taught to compete with opponent and win. this creates a zeal to achieve success. Furthermore, to find the right job, job seekers have to compete with numerous people to get a job offer. So competitiveness is not a bad attribute until it is changed to rivalry.
Secondly, children should be encouraged to work collaboratively, because it is the key to success. For an instance, at the workplace when there is a tight deadline to finish a project, working as a team will ensure desired results, else it will be a failure. Where a kid is taught to compete with other teams to win a game, they should be educated to cooperate within team to achieve victory. kids who are taught to co-operate will turn to be a good spouse, an important team player and maybe a good leader.
Overall, teaching to compete will help kids to survive and educating them to co-operate will help them to achieve success as team. Although, competitiveness and cooperativeness are two distinct characteristics, teaching children both will assist them to become better humans. In my opinion, having both characteristics will make any kid a better adult.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09324758842 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06544719945 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511254019293 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0466019228 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1764705882 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2941176471 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206197034401 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647894919951 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609251097113 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137019973325 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672307669216 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.