Modern technology, such as personal computers and the internet have made it possible to do their work from home at least part of the time, instead of going to an office everyday. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this.
In recent times, technology has made advancements to an extent that people can do most of the work, shopping from home. People are saving much time utilizing scientific miracles. There are many advantages and drawbacks which we will discuss in this essay.
On the one hand, technology developments have made it easier for many people to save time by working from home. For an instance, if a person is saving two hours by avoiding commuting to and from office. staff can spend adequate time with their loved ones. furthermore, this will prevent hassle of travelling. Saving proportion of time will permit to efficiently use leisure in hobbies and to meet friends. Saving time is the major element for the people who opt to work from home, however, this has few drawbacks.
On the other hand, remote work seems to be ineffective for many. A survey done by Business Times, have reported that remote work has less productivity than in office work. The reason being people cannot use time efficiently because of numerous distractions. Furthermore bonding with peers becomes difficult as they rarely meet.
To summarize, despite of many advantages that technology brought us, effective use of computes and internet will bring us fruitful results. With an option of a setting up a mini office at home might dilute the negative side of it.
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Suggestion: Furthermore,
...ently because of numerous distractions. Furthermore bonding with peers becomes difficult as...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1127.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05381165919 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64544347355 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627802690583 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.0700352347 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.1333333333 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8666666667 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13333333333 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26492024364 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814565477385 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536546900776 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152158494147 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426572431331 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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