Genetic engineering is an important issue in society today. Some people think that it will improve people' lives in many ways. Others feel that it may be a threat to life on earth. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
It is true that genetic engineering is one of the key areas of modern technology. While a number of people believe that genetic modifying is a source of dangers, i would argue that it benefits our lives in many ways.
People consider genetic engineering as harmful when it comes to food production and cloning human. Firstly, as an increasing number of genetically modified crops are grown, many fear that they can destroy the entire ecosystem. This might be explained by the fact that genetically edited plants are resistant to many diseases and even predators. Secondly, people fear that genetic technology will be used for unethical purposes such as cloning human to fight wars or creating harmful creatures.
On the other hand, i strongly believe that if we use genetic engineering properly, it can contribute a lot to human progress. For instance, from food production perspective, genetically modified crops are a great measure to reduce famine in developing countries as this kind of crops can thrive even in harsh environment. From medical perspective, doctors can use genetic technologies to cure diseases or clone individual organs for transplant purposes. As a result, this help to save many lives.
In conclusion, although genetic engineering may have its own dangers, it seem to me that its advantages outweigh its drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...netic modifying is a source of dangers, i would argue that it benefits our lives ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun fear seems to be countable; consider using: 'many fears'.
Suggestion: many fears
...f genetically modified crops are grown, many fear that they can destroy the entire ecosys...
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Message: Did you mean 'seems'?
Suggestion: seems
...ngineering may have its own dangers, it seem to me that its advantages outweigh its ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1132.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24074074074 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91753367478 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597222222222 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8593484783 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.909090909 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4545454545 7.06120827912 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194941897009 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077154607609 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404339075191 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120867304811 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496937600766 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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