Nowadays doctors can become very rich. Maybe they should not focus on profitable activities such as plastic surgery or looking after rich patients and concentrate more on patients' health, no matter how rich they are?

Recently, most medical practitioners were pre occupied in making money rather than concentrating on the real health benefits of their patients. This essay will discuss the two sides of the argument.

Let us take a look at a doctor who keeps on focusing on the financial capability of the patient. They do this as a part of their practice to earn more. As a result, they ended up in a failure of treatment. For example, a dentist may advise his patient to go for an expensive treatment, which is a crown, in spite of taking into consideration that restorative filling, which is more affordable, will...

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

Sentence: It is an advantage for them to be financially equipt and stable as well.
Error: equipt Suggestion: No alternate word

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 316 350
No. of Characters: 1466 1500
No. of Different Words: 181 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.216 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.639 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.65 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 102 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 75 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 51 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 33 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.75 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.801 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.75 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.28 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.492 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.076 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5