Nowadays, it is becoming a practice to wear school uniforms across the globe. While the majority of educational professionals are of the opinion that uniforms make pupils proactive in their study by decimating the socioeconomic disparities, the tiny number argues that these infringe upon students basic right to be individual. This essay agrees that uniforms are crucial in maintaining equality between underprivileged and wealthy students in schools. This essay will discuss both views.
First of all, despite their economic standards, it is vital to treat every student equally in social platforms such as schools, colleges and so on. Moreover, it is a social responsibility. For instance, it is common that children appear from all kinds of social and economic classes in any government schools such as underprivileged and affluent. It is our primary responsibility to maintain harmony and make schools socially safe for these kids.
However, some experts are denying this fact and they argue that individual freedom is important and saying that it doesn’t affect their studies. For instance, a deprived student in one random school has achieved the first rank despite their uniform and social class. They say that a particular school has proscribed uniforms and gave freedom of clothing.
In conclusion, while the benefits of protocols such as compulsory of uniforms make students safe and socially equal in public schools, some still feel it is crucial to have an individual freedom of clothes. However, in my opinion, it is important to make children their goal despite all these things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...for these kids. However, some experts are denying this fact and they argue that individua...
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Line 4, column 174, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'individual freedom'.
Suggestion: individual freedom
..., some still feel it is crucial to have an individual freedom of clothes. However, in my opinion, it ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, still, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36904761905 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92385465643 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.626387015 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.076923077 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29080745507 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10141938943 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063395058963 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178751383783 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440180879779 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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