People are easier to get educated today than in the past
Education plays an essential role in the development of human societies. While some think that people are easier to get educated today, some might think the opposite. As for me, I firmly believe that people are much easier to get educated nowadays than in the past. The reason goes follows.
As a start, people are easier to get education materials nowadays since there is an increasing amount of online open courses for free access nowadays. For example, recently, many prestige universities upload and open their classes and lectures to the Internet, such as MIT OpenCourseWare, Coursera, etc. People can utilize free materials and study anytime. In other words, they are not required to enroll in school to receive an education. On the other hand, in the old days, there is only one way to get educated: attend class in person. So, it is easier to get educated today.
Secondly, almost everyone can receive fundamental education offered by governments in modern times. Compared to the past, Many countries are giving compulsory education nowadays. For example, the Taiwanese government provides citizens with a 16-year mandatory education. People are required to study 16 years from elementary schools, junior high schools, and senior high schools. One can receive 16-year learning whatever the financial condition he or she has. Hence, compulsory education makes it easier to get educated.
Last but not least, public transportation today is much more convenient than before, which helps people go to schools and receive education easier. For example, for most schools, they are located in cities. In the old days, there is little public transportation, so people have no choice but to go to schools by walk or by bicycle. However, with the growth of public transit, people nowadays can take subways, railways, or public buses to get to school. Consequently, it is easier to go to school and, therefore, receiving an education is easier.
Based on the above reasons, I solidly believe that to get educated, it is easier today than in the old times.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, however, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as for, for example, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16964285714 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73304237449 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526785714286 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4219517608 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9545454545 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2727272727 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.492981596811 0.236089414692 209% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148178096279 0.076458572812 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156901181963 0.0737576698707 213% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302608975235 0.150856017488 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113559690121 0.0645574589148 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.11 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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