You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter
• provide information about yourself
• give details of your previous work experience
• say why the company should consider you for the job You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear …,
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing to you for the production manager job which has been advertised in the newspaper last week.
Firstly, I would like to introduce myself. My name is Ahmed, I am from Egypt, married and I have 3 children. I am a mechanical engineer, and I have been an engineer since 1998 and I am working as a production manager at steel factory in Saudi Arabia; I have 15 years’ experience at the same filed.
Secondly, I want to give you some details about my previous work experience. Since 2010, I am working as a production manager at steel factory. I am responsible for the production team, production planning; moreover, I look after the estimation cost of the projects. I believe that I will be useful for you company as I have a good experience for the same filed more than 15 years.
Thank you for your attention. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
Ahmed Karem
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-11-19 | Ahmed karem Mahmoud Ahmed | 73 | view |
| 2018-05-13 | rezafathi | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing to you for the production m...
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... for the same filed more than 15 years. Thank you for your attention. I am looki...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hearing from you. Yours faithfully Ahmed Karem
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, look, moreover, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 783.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7743902439 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81414164859 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603658536585 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3195287591 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.1818181818 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9090909091 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2691322952 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106960588026 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831845302687 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175705820979 0.12726935374 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061133377458 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.