In many countries, smoking is now illegal in public places.
Do you agree or disagree?
Smoking has not been allowed in public places in some countries.This essay totally agrees that smoking should be banned at public places. Firstly, this essay will discuss secondhand smoke happens in puplic places and secondly it will disscuss reducing smoking effects on adult’s behaviours .
Secondhand smoker has the same harmful chemicals that smokers inhale. Passive smoking happens when non-smokers breathe in the smoke from active smokers in puplic areas or closed one, As a result of that non-smokers could have the same diseases as well as smokers such as blood pressure and lungs cancer. In 2019 a research from the worled health organization showed that 70% of secondhand smokers are mostly suffering from the same illness as active smokers.
Adults get habits and attitudes from their surrounding. Hence, prohibiting fumigation in crowed places and make isolated areas for smokers such as streets and working areas is going to help reducing the number of teenager smokers. Moreover , smoking will not be a normal behaviour for them. The Gurdian newspaper published a study in 2018 that countries which has been made smoking illegal in public places reduce the youth smokers from 30% to 20% a year.
In conclusion , this essay supports that decision makers ought to banned public smokers in order to avoid increasing involuntray smoking and safe our adults from tobacco. It is recommend that governments should create new
strict rules to prevent smoking at all or at least increasing the prices and taxses on tobacco products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, as for, at least, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30487804878 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60588418951 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2801732308 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.636363636 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3636363636 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4545454545 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153976525542 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630864888825 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825402262095 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894690129799 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729645596089 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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