Some people think that current environmental issues are global problems and should therefore be dealt with the government
while others believe that these problems can only be tackled by the individuals.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is indubitable to say that in contemporary era, environment is degrading at a higher rate and is becoming a worldwide issue.Fair amount of masses opine that it is the responsibility of government to solve this issue while others in contrast deem that individuals should come forward to protect the environment. This essay will discuss both sides along with my own opinion.
To begin with the former view, public authorities can impose strict rules and regulations regarding throwing rubbish on open streets.In addition,there should be provision of dustbins in every corner of city by the councils.What is more,government can start awareness campaigns by giving ads on TV about ruining of environment these days.As a consequent,it will awake people towards this grave problem.
On the other hand some people opine that it is onus of individuals to alleviate this problems.Firstly,they can plant trees in their homes.This will solve the problems of air pollution as well as global warming.Secondly, instead of using private vehicles they can use public transportation which can lessen the amount of fumes releasing by the motor vehicles because these toxic gases are the major sources which are deteriorating the environment.
In my opinion,government and people play equal role in stopping the environment from getting degraded. Masses should know their role towards clean surroundings and central authorities should also keep an eye on the people who are decaying the environment.
To Conclude,environment problem is becoming a concerning issue nowadays .An optimal approach should be taken by every human on this earth to alleviate this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while, in addition, in contrast, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5234375 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.45435321766 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60546875 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 140.433439823 49.4020404114 284% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 202.0 106.682146367 189% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.5714285714 20.7667163134 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 23.8571428571 7.06120827912 338% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2775549536 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118269125942 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444525166575 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13931680527 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248180130007 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.9 13.0946893788 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.48 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.33 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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