Essay topics:
The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.
The diagrams illustrate different stages in the life cycle of salmon.
overall, there are 3 stages in the development of salmon, from salmon eggs to mature salmon.
In the first stage of the life cycle the reeds move upper river slightly to small stones to create salmon eggs. this stage takes about 5-6 months to become a fry salmon which is 3-8 cm. In the next 4 years, this spices of fish flows fast in a lower river and grow 7-9 cm called smolt.
In the next stage of the life cycle, the smolt live in open sea in about 5 years. At this time, they become adult salmon which has a length of 70-76 cm and the life cycle starts again.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Overall
...tages in the life cycle of salmon. overall, there are 3 stages in the development ...
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Line 9, column 113, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... to small stones to create salmon eggs. this stage takes about 5-6 months to become ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 532.0 965.302439024 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 122.0 196.424390244 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3606557377 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.32345618554 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.9262295082 2.65546596893 73% => OK
Unique words: 74.0 106.607317073 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606557377049 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 152.1 283.868780488 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 14.4504784187 43.030603864 34% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.0 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4285714286 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.28571428571 5.23603664747 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267590329805 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136847923432 0.103423049105 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836645865226 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194459405664 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726213820459 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.2329268293 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 88.06 61.2550243902 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 11.4140731707 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 40.7170731707 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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