You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
• explain why you have moved
• describe the new house
• invite your friend to come and visit
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ............,
Dear Anna,
Hi, how are how. Hope you are having a joyous time. I am writing this letter to express my happiness and excitement of shifting to new and bigger house.
The earlier home where we were staying was very small for our family of four members. As there were only two bedrooms with a single bathroom and a small kitchen and living room. Moreover, the place was not well ventilated which caused suffocation problems.
The new place where we have shifted is very big and properly ventilated. There are four bedrooms with attached bathrooms and a big dining room and fully equipped kitchen. Furthermore, there is a big lawn, a beautiful garden in the front of the house, and a big garage. There is a big park and a shopping mall only a few steps away from mu house
I would like to invite you to visit me in my new house this weekend along with your family. We would love to see you and I am sure that you will like the place.
Our new address and phone number is mentioned below. Hope to see you soon.
Lots of love,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 88, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and properly ventilated. There are four bedrooms with attached bathrooms and a b...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44845360825 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27965629419 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60824742268 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8251212281 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.6428571429 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8571428571 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182003822618 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593878382201 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663354654127 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10651144194 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795415290401 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.48 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.