You have recently started work in a new company.
Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter:
• explain why you changed jobs
• describe your new job
• tell him/her your other news
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write your own addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Julia,
Hi, how are how. It has been a long time since we last spoke or met and I hope you are having a joyous time. I am writing this letter to let you know that I have resigned from my previous company and have started a new job.
My previous job was in a Business Process Outsourcing. It had a very hectic work schedule. It used to take one and half hours to reach to office and the working hours were also very late as a result it hampered my social life. Moreover, the pay scale was also very low and the company did not have the policy of either providing promotion or give a hike in the salary.
I have started my new job in a mutual fund. The working hours are very comfortable and also the office is not very far from my home. Furthermore, the salary is very attractive and the company also provide the opportunity of enhancement of career. They also have a trend of appraising the work of the employees yearly with awards.
I have enrolled in MBA course in distance education from Amity University along with my job. Additionally, I am planning to go to visit my parents in Mumbai next month and spend some time with them.
I hope you will take out some of your time to visit me in Canada. Hope to see you soon.
Lots of love,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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| 2019-11-25 | Prabhp | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... soon. Lots of love, Prabhpreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, you know, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1035.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 241.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29460580913 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37014104391 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55601659751 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 344.7 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.521660411 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.6875 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0625 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180595695336 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610815435379 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706521435545 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106370867447 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674281945835 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.01 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.