You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live?
Give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience
With the advancement in technology new an easier way has been developed to cook food which made the lives of people much more convenient. In my opinion, I do believe that with people getting more and more occupied with their family and job cooking food using latest methods has made lives much simpler.
Many people have an opinion that now women do not have to spend hours in kitchen in cooking food as compare to earlier times when women used to spend their entire day to cook meals for all the members using mortar and pestle as well as earthen ports. To illustrate, now rice cooker helps to cook rice in 10 minutes as compared to the cooker used earlier which used to take half an hour to cook rice.
Moreover, by using modern methods to cook food not only helps in cooking faster but also aids women to take out time for themselves and their family. In today’s time women have to balance their time between work, family and for themselves and thus with cooking made faster it is convenient for them to spend time with their children after work and even to do exercise. To illustrate, according to the recent report more than 80 percent of working women are able to give their time to children because of the faster cooking
To conclude, I vehemently agree that with the latest technology food is cooked instantly and thus people’s live is much easier as after working for hours they o not have to spend much time in kitchen for cooking food and can-do other activities as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 254, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'using the latest'.
Suggestion: using the latest
... with their family and job cooking food using latest methods has made lives much simpler. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, then, thus, well, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60447761194 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27580129903 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473880597015 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.3101912188 49.4020404114 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 176.285714286 106.682146367 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.2857142857 20.7667163134 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117687422924 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716106238236 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.025523080257 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879847863582 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237010456357 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.83 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.