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As far as I am concerned, I feel that performing an enjoyable job is far better and is more important. I feel this way because the such job would bring more interest in us and it would lead us to a better performance and gives us happiness.
First of all, doing an enjoyable job would bring more interest and alert. In other words, a profession that gives a decent income and is fun to do would always help us in giving a result a way better than the job which is boring despite its high income. For instance, last year I was working in a pharmaceutical company, and the project on which I was assigned was too boring, therefore, I was reluctant to go to the job every morning. Thus, my performance deteriorated eventually, I left the job and joined a restaurant where I have made some really good friends. Although it gives me a lesser salary yet I have so much interest and performing the job. It is more enjoyable in a way that I meet different people and learn from them.
Secondly, performing a job which we like, would bring happiness and a better future. What I mean is that doing a job that we are enjoying, would bring happiness. Even if it is a simple job, if we enjoy doing it then life would be far better without work stress. For example, one of my friends, she works in a cooperate company, her job is to manage new projects and approve them all. Although she earns good money still, she is always stressed out even when she is on an outing with us, and she always talks about her jobs. I could sense the high tension and stress in her life due to her present job. A recent survey revealed that most of the stress is work-related.
In conclusion, I prefer to do an enjoyable job would give a decent income rather than a boring and high salaried job because it would be more interesting to perform and because it would bring happiness and keep us away from stressed life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 308, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...xample, one of my friends, she works in a cooperate company, her job is to manage new proje...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, thus, as to, for example, for instance, i feel, i mean, in conclusion, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 24.0651302605 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36543909348 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54601892378 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475920679887 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0662764089 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3125 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0625 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 12.4159519038 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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