You ride a bicycle to work, but there is a problem with the parking. Write a letter to the manager of the Parking Management Company.
In your letter, you should tell:
• why you ride a bicycle to work
• what the problem is with the parking
• what your suggest are.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you with regards to the parking place at our company.
My name is Tomasz Zawadzki and I have been working for Telecom for more than 10 years. I have never had a problem with the parking place until recently.
I am very active and pro environmental person. Every day I use my bicycle to get to the work and back home. Since 20 of November I have problem with a place to park my bike. I think it is good news for everybody because it is mean that more people are using their bicycles instead of cars. According to this good news we should increase number of spots for the bikes. I have some suggestions how we can solve this problem.
First, we can easily change a few car park spots into the bike spots.
Secondly, we can install two or three bikes racks on the wall behind the lift.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Your faithfully,
Tomasz Zawadzki
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you with regards to the ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... with the parking place until recently. I am very active and pro environmental p...
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Line 11, column 109, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...cycle to get to the work and back home. Since 20 of November I have problem with a pl...
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Line 15, column 71, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...few car park spots into the bike spots. Secondly, we can install two or three bi...
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Line 17, column 80, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ikes racks on the wall behind the lift. I look forward to hearing from you. ...
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Line 25, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hearing from you. Your faithfully, Tomasz Zawadzki
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, secondly, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 756.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47337278107 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24459326886 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656804733728 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.158119246 44.8134815571 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.1538461538 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228484788206 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758438357651 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666811719491 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0964928868067 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855690034422 0.0580467560999 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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