An international development organization, in response to a vitamin A deficiency among people in the impoverished nation of Tagus, has engineered a new breed of millet high in vitamin A. While seeds for this new type of millet cost more, farmers will be paid subsidies for farming the new variety of millet. Since millet is already a staple food in Tagus, people will readily adopt the new variety. To combat vitamin A deficiency, the government of Tagus should do everything it can to promote this new type of millet.
The author of the argument concluded new breed of millet which is high in vitamin A will surely decline deficiency among people in the nation tagus.At first glance, this conclusion appears to be true however further reflection revels that statement omit substantial concerns to be addressed, And thus not cogent enough to substantiate the conclusion.
Firstly, the author states that an international development organization, in response to a vitamin A deficiency among people in the impoverished nation of tagus, has engineered a new breed of millet high in vitamin A.however author did not provide cogent statistics about how many people are suffering from deficiency of vitamin A. moreover, the author does not provide any evidence to support his view. it might possible that people who are suffering from deficiency of vitamin A is mainly due to bad heath or is equally possible that most of the people are in the age group of 50 to 80 and in this age group people might have deficiency of vitamin A and no medicine can cure it. however, if author provide more information about deficiency among people in nation of tagus. it will might make his statement valid.
Secondly, the author states that while seeds for this new type of millet cost more, farmers will be paid subsidies for farming the new variety of millet. however, author does not provide any significant information about the cost of new breed of millet. it might possible that even if farmers will be paid subsidies for farming the new variety of millet he will be not interested to cultivate that new breed of millet. further, Its equally possible if farmers are ready to cultivate the new breed of millet but millet can only be cultivated in particular season which may result in loss in farmer annual income.if the author provide more information about weather millet is seasonal or not and also weather it will profit farmer or not than it will make author statement cogent.
Thirdly, the author assume that people will readily adopt the new variety . To support his assumption he states that Since millet is already a staple food in tagus, people will readily adopt the new variety.however, author did not provide any evidence about whether people adoption of new variety which makes the author assumption unreliable.
By considering the discussion above it can be seen that the reason mentioned are not enough to support author suggestion. The argument loses weight because it has no explanation for the discussion given above.The author of the argument concluded new breed of millet which is high in vitamin A will surely decline deficiency among people in the nation tagus.At first glance, this conclusion appears to be true however further reflection revels that statement omit substantial concerns to be addressed, And thus not cogent enFirstly, the author states that an international development organization, in response to a vitamin A deficiency among people in the impoverished nation of tagus, has engineered a new breed of millet high in vitamin A.however author did not provide cogent statistics about how many people are suffering from deficiency of vitamin A. moreover, the author does not provide any evidence to support his view. it might possible that people who are suffering from deficiency of vitamin A is mainly due to bad heath or is equally possible that most of the people are in the age group of 50 to 80 and in this age group people might have deficiency of vitamin A and no medicine can cure it. however, if author provide more information about deficiency among people in nation of tagus. it will might make his statement valid.
support author suggestion. The argument loses weight because it has no explanation for the discussion given above.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 628 350
No. of Characters: 3075 1500
No. of Different Words: 165 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 5.006 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.896 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.649 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 243 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 158 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 96 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 72 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 48.308 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 28.851 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.692 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.482 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.73 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.237 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ciency among people in the nation tagus.At first glance, this conclusion appears t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, while, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.6327345309 127% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.9520958084 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 13.6137724551 147% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 28.8173652695 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 90.0 55.5748502994 162% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 16.3942115768 177% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3182.0 2260.96107784 141% => OK
No of words: 623.0 441.139720559 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10754414125 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.99599519102 4.56307096286 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72070597852 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 204.123752495 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.277688603531 0.468620217663 59% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1015.2 705.55239521 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.96107784431 161% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.76447105788 114% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.22255489022 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 22.8473053892 136% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 165.554401935 57.8364921388 286% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 159.1 119.503703932 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.15 23.324526521 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95 5.70786347227 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.25449101796 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.517565919647 0.218282227539 237% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172020195595 0.0743258471296 231% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154829703955 0.0701772020484 221% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277232368836 0.128457276422 216% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142512416778 0.0628817314937 227% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 14.3799401198 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 48.3550499002 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.197005988 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 12.5979740519 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.32208582834 86% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 98.500998004 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 12.3882235529 238% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.1389221557 129% => OK
text_standard: 30.0 11.9071856287 252% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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