More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation.
Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution.
Majority of people are using their own vehicles for fulfil the regular transport needs. Over using private cars may cause some problems including, Environmental pollution and traffic congestion. I believe, imposing more taxes on cars and encourage travelers for public transport can be minimized the problem.
The higher rate of vehicle usage may badly impact for the environment whereas the people lost the fresh air at the atmosphere. As a result of greater amount of carbon dioxide in vehicle fumes cause for breath diseases. In addition, huge number of personal vehicles are being resulting for road traffic. This leads inconveniences for the travelers and wasting their valuable time inefficiently. The recent research done at Colombo university social science faculty reveals, 80% of regular travelers suffered by daily road traffic.
In order to avoid the high carbon dioxide emission by fumes of vehicles, the number of transports should be limited. People are more likely for private vehicles as it is convenient and saving time compared to the public transport. In addition, when commuters highly influence on public transport would bring a perfect solution for the traffic congestion. Not only this discourage the private transportation, but also more benefits can be seen which have less detrimental effect for the environment. On the other hand, government can impose heavy taxes for cars to limit the private transportation.
To conclude, although people depending more on private transport at their daily travels, I believe public transport should be introduced to use for the majority of commuters to minimize the traffic as well as protect the surrounding pollute by vehicle fumes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, so, well, whereas, in addition, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47924528302 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8600039583 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566037735849 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.118637108 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.714285714 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204870989431 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804187070265 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070345710538 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150730485454 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0801780301979 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.