Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter
• explain why you are writing
• describe your circumstances
• ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to find out about the details of the new computer course made available by the college in their offered computer programs.
I am a student of first year from B.com department who joined the college last month. When I joined, I enquired about the plethora of courses offered by the college, but nothing interested me. I recently read an article on the college notice board about the new course on graphics been made available. Graphics is something which really stimulates me, and I enjoy doing it in my leisure time. Also, I am really interested in learning and building my professional career in the same field. Unfortunately, this course is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
I shall be grateful if a special exception can be made for my enrolment. Waiting for your positive response.
Yours faithfully,
Rajesh Kumar
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, so, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 751.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 147.0 206.0 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10884353741 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79292919974 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673469387755 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0477605725 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20792827513 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758582716126 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0991593063216 0.0603063233224 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110975024571 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.088141660538 0.0580467560999 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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