In today’s rapidly changing globalized world, usage of mobile devices, smart phones, tablets, laptops and computer has become one of the pressing issue, required immediate attention. From last few decades, usage of those appliances has brought significant changes in our daily life. In this essay will discuss about the pros and cons of the frequently usage of gadgets.
On one hand, nevertheless, it is reasonable to mention that electronic gadgets have made our life very easy. Specially our juveniles are vitally dependent on mobiles/ phones. It is a great source of information and entertainment. For instance, if we are standing in a waiting line could get entertain by watching or listening to the songs, it is a great source of current affairs too. Young generation could use it efficiently by using it during exams days. For example, they can get online lectures by famous teachers, can learn many languages according to their convenient time.
On the other hand, many studies has proved that although mobile and smart phones brought thousands of advantages in our lives, still many serious issues are there with might lead to detrimental problems in our life. The main disadvantage of electronic gadgets are related to the health. Excess usage of screen could lead to weaken eye sight and some times delay in brain development of small kids.
In the conclusion, I would like to mention that in this modernized world, technology development is a blessing for human being. Therefore it is responsibility of every individual to take full advantage of these appliances. In order to ameliorate the disadvantage, people should be aware about the limitations of those technologies. Hence it is very important for everyone to limit the screen time and ought be careful and aware about the surroundings while using it.
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Question is about quick…
Question is about quick accessibility to films and games, which is not discussed in this essay.
I want to understand how did e-grader evaluate this essay and gave an 8?
No disrespect, I just want to understand what if task response is not justified in any of the body paragraphs?
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 575, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... languages according to their convenient time. On the other hand, many studies...
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Line 5, column 332, Rule ID: EYE_BROW[1]
Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesight'.
Suggestion: eyesight
...ss usage of screen could lead to weaken eye sight and some times delay in brain developme...
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Line 7, column 129, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...elopment is a blessing for human being. Therefore it is responsibility of every individua...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... the limitations of those technologies. Hence it is very important for everyone to li...
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Line 7, column 402, Rule ID: OUGHT_SAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ought to be'?
Suggestion: ought to be
...r everyone to limit the screen time and ought be careful and aware about the surrounding...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21959459459 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88528347932 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5424420432 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5625 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146281348428 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384735679469 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385903288337 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0798599228268 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0130031946156 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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