: Give the cause for population in particular area or city.
The pollution in particular or in city is more and more seriously, it is really too difficult to solve. The causes of this issue derived from activities life and natural. The purpose of the essay is to point out the cause of problem above.
The first and immediate reason of pollution in particular area or city is garbage. First, garbage is anything people throw away, the same as waste. In fact, society makes millions tons of garbage a day. Landfills, the palace where people put the garbage, close when they are full. Moreover, nasty smelling’s garbage polute the air. Second, another kind of garbage is hazardous waste. It has poisonous, chemicals or metals. Both of them are reason why particular area or city become the population. To illustrate, some poison inside hazardous wastes move through rainwater. Then it can pollute the natural water in the ground.
The more important cause for pollution in particular area or city is natural disasters. First, we have to suffer many intense consequences from flood every year. Specifically, both infrastructure and human get to face with terrible damaging. Dirty muddy and foggy garbage come from flood that reason stuck sewer pipes, so flood root <span style="font-size: 19.36px;">water pollution in particular area or city</span>. Second, volcano eruption also is one of major inducemens. When dust of volcano cover everything and it even pass out in the air, which in turn have temperatures. It is the most prominent and dangerous form of pollution.
In conclusion, there are some mainly reasons for pollution in particular area or city. Many laws had promulgated to solve and to improve serious matters and we received optimistic result. Nevertheless, we still need more real activities in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...point out the cause of problem above. The first and immediate reason of pollution...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or city. Second, volcano eruption also is one of major inducemens. When du...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, nevertheless, really, second, so, still, then, in conclusion, in fact, in particular, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23426573427 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08641455647 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8282837382 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.0869565217 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4347826087 20.7667163134 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.21739130435 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204995399357 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540059022634 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.096964328085 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126050114899 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306529180777 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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