The graph below shows the changes in food consumption by Chinese people between 1985 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram illustrates data about the changes in food consumption in China over a twenty five-year period between 1985 and 2010. It can be obviously seen that the consumption of fish took the first place during the given period.
In 1985, the amount of fish consumption made up nearly 600 gr., whereas the proportion of meat consumption accounted for the lowest at approximately 100 gr. In the following 10 years, the figure relating to meat consumption gradually increased to slightly less than 200 gr., while the amount of salt declined from 500 to 300 gr. However, during this time, there...
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2014-07-19 | drjowelynt | 80 | view |
| 2018-10-21 | emat18 | 84 | view |
- The charts below show the percentage of the water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- the bar chart below shows the percentage of people in Great Britain living alone by age and sex in 2004 and 2005 54
- Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.Discuss both these views a 73
- The rising levels of congestion and air pollution found in most of the world cities can be attributed directly to the rapidly increasing number of private cars in use. In order to reverse this decline in the quality of life in cities, attempts must be mad 70
- Some universities admit students purely on the basis of academic grades, while other universities consider the interview and personal statement to be important. 70
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 10
No. of Words: 171 200
No. of Characters: 811 1000
No. of Different Words: 95 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.616 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.743 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.833 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 52 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 39 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 32 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 24 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.375 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.357 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.625 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.492 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.685 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.179 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4