Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state.
: Forests and greenery aids in helping the environment maintain its ecological balance.Forest reserve ,parks are a great source of refreshment for people and provides the feeling of relaxation and calmness from the
hustles of the city life.But the increasing number of deforestation,grazing through out the world has severely hampered the forests to thrive and hence so many animals are on the verge of extinction.Not only that forest
also contributes in mitigating the harmful effects of drought,environmental disasters,climate change etc.So its our duty to preserve as much as we can to protect it for our own good.
Without stringent laws and regulations unwise poachers,traders are misusing the forests and literally getting away with their illicit activities.Its high time that nation should pass laws so that deforestation can be stopped and
maintained to revive again.Greenery serves a great deal in leisure activities such as hiking ,camping and adventure.It serves many purposes from serving adventure lovers to nature loving explorers.
According to survey 40% of Bangladesh's natures reserve are already destroyed and the sulprits are making bussiness out of it.This proves how important it has become to pass laws so it can be regulated before its too late.
There is however some aspects where it is required to weigh the pros and cons if preserving the wilderness inclines to do more harm than good. Consider a forest reserve in the middle of an isolated town that is in dire need of a
hospital and there is no preferable land to implement it.It is unlikely the people in that town will prefer preserving the forest than vote for building the hospital.
Preserving the wilderness is our duty towards nature for our own good.From our source of oxygen to mollifying the deletorious effects of climate change and disasters ,it does it all.
And the nation should definately pass laws in order to preserve and maintain it before its too late.
However its also important to consider situations where it might bring more harm than good but other than that its high time that we keep nature pristine and allow it thrive to its full vigor again.
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...at we keep nature pristine and allow it thrive to its full vigor again.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 351.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23076923077 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09633026426 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547008547009 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 23.0359550562 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 162.032404167 60.3974514979 268% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 229.5 118.986275619 193% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.875 23.4991977007 187% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.21951772744 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.97078651685 221% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 28.0 7.80617977528 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163243099589 0.243740707755 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928141894619 0.0831039109588 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783550922991 0.0758088955206 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0737349843152 0.150359130593 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0801482778027 0.0667264976115 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.1 14.1392134831 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 48.8420337079 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 12.1743820225 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.38706741573 119% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 11.8971910112 265% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 11.2143820225 171% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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