Tourism has become an important industry. This can damage traditional
culture.
Do the benefits of tourism outweigh the drawbacks?
Certain experts assert that conventional cultural values could be deteriorated because the field of tourism has gained importance in every nation.If asked, I strongly opine that the problems generated by such trend would be more as compared to any benefit it might bring.
To begin with, the major issue by this movement would be increase in the environmental pollution. Since the tourist encourages the usage of plastic, which is not degradable, processing of these waste results into emission of toxic gases. For example, the Thailand authorities has noted that a rise in the number of travellers resulted increased in the content of carbon dioxide in their surroundings by 4%.
In addition, boost in the offensive activities has been also a matter of concern.While the travelling individuals visiting the host country are unfamiliar of certain localities, sometimes have to face troubles with the locals residing over there. To exemplify, female visitors are not only burgled by the miscreants but also get physically harassment in several remote areas of Pakistan.
However, such trend has a benefit of enhancement in economy, too. As the citizens in the country would revive the chances of various employments with increase in the travellers, the growth rate of such countries becomes high. For instance, the cognizance of jump in per capita income by 9% had been made by the government of Maldives in last year.
In conclusion, I believe that an uplift in the atmospheric pollution and criminal activities arising from tourism outweigh the positive aspect of advancement in the economical condition of those lands.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37209302326 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94296330096 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651162790698 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.6099001814 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.6 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113245437915 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0353126117184 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449587938252 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0585834927915 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500860060033 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.51 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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