Paleo diets, in which one eats how early hominids (human ancestors) did, are becoming increasingly popular. Proponents claim our bodies evolved to eat these types of food, especially bone broth, a soup made by cooking animal bones for several hours. They believe it has many health-promoting nutrients, such as cartilage, which can heal our joints, and chondroitin, which promotes nerve regeneration. Skeptics point out that ingested cartilage can’t replenish cartilage in your knees or elbows and ingested chondroitin doesn’t make our brains any healthier. Yet, there is strong anecdotal evidence that people who consume bone broth have fewer metabolic and inflammatory diseases than those who don’t. Therefore, ancient humans knew something about our physiology that we don’t, and that by emulating the way they ate, we can cure many chronic illnesses.
A diet rich in certain foods may benefit a person's joints and brains. Naturally, one must think about why they should do a certain things. This argument is flawed because it treats anecdotal evidence as trustworthy, the argument does not consider the overall lifestyle of the person, and then assumes humans would do a particular act because they undestand the exact sceicne behind it.
The fondational proof for such a claim is built upon anecdotal evidence. Although one can use an individual case study to analyze a finer point of a general claim, one cannot base an entire assumption on anecdotal evidence. First, a person that already buys the assumption that consuming cartilage and chondroitin assist in the regeneration of one's cartilage and nerves can be influenced by a placebo effect. The individual suffers from confirmation bias. To improve this claim, one must seek out a sizable sample size and require each canidate to see a qualified medical professional. The person sustaining such a diet must be check before they begin consuming these foods, and then during the duration of the diet. The person must record all foods, and thene a nutritionist can anayze the findings. The data must then be complied together to determine a pattern. An individual exeprince is too falable.
Additionally, a person cannot exclusivley attribute improved joints or increased brain health to a diet rich in bone broth and chondroitin. A person who takes mental pains to consume a heathy diet may also assume other types of health foods. A person who chooses foods based on health instead of taste may also avoid foods that result in an unhealthy outcome. Also, one cannot assume that diet alone results in better bone of brain health. If a person is concerned with thier joints, they may also chose excersizes that are kind to the knees and elbows, but contribute positively to thier body's health. If they are concious of thier brain's health, they may play mental games. To soley attribute improved heath to what one eats excludes so much of one's life.
More over, the writer calims that even if these results are true, humans must have consumed these foods because they understood the exact benefits of thier make up. IEven if one assumes the findings are true, one cannot assume that they understand why "human ancestors" from the paelo period ate cartilage-rich or chondroitin-heavy foods. The foods could have been consumed accidentally. Humans could assume that in order for foods to grow, they must expose thier crops to the sun to appease a sun-god. This will result in crops growing, but this does not mean that the sun is a god that must be satisfied. The result is positive, but the reasoning is flawed.
This argument does not consider that anecdotial evidence is not trusthworthy, nore that someone may improve for many reasons. Also, it assumes humans act a certain way on purpose, but a human can do something good without knowing the sceince behind such an act.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 27 15
No. of Words: 501 350
No. of Characters: 2424 1500
No. of Different Words: 245 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.731 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.838 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.561 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 174 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 115 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 75 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 50 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.556 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.978 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.63 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.274 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.468 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.084 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'thing'?
Suggestion: thing
...hink about why they should do a certain things. This argument is flawed because it tre...
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Line 5, column 345, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ondroitin assist in the regeneration of ones cartilage and nerves can be influenced ...
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Line 5, column 802, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...a nutritionist can anayze the findings. The data must then be complied together to ...
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Line 9, column 748, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...th to what one eats excludes so much of ones life. More over, the writer calims...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.6327345309 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 27.0 12.9520958084 208% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 11.1786427146 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 13.6137724551 103% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 28.8173652695 111% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 55.5748502994 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2504.0 2260.96107784 111% => OK
No of words: 501.0 441.139720559 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99800399202 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73107062784 4.56307096286 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67827531682 2.78398813304 96% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 204.123752495 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50499001996 0.468620217663 108% => OK
syllable_count: 783.0 705.55239521 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.96107784431 141% => OK
Article: 15.0 8.76447105788 171% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.67365269461 418% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 19.7664670659 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.6567919037 57.8364921388 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7407407407 119.503703932 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 23.324526521 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2962962963 5.70786347227 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.20758483034 183% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148218889154 0.218282227539 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402543934697 0.0743258471296 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03082121914 0.0701772020484 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.077598709824 0.128457276422 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302579483344 0.0628817314937 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.3799401198 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.3550499002 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.197005988 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.5979740519 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.32208582834 98% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 98.500998004 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 12.3882235529 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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