Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since the dawn of humanity, human being have been engaged in a great struggle to find a suitable job. In the contemporary world, however, there is a heated controversy as you whether, one should get a secure job as soon as has the opportunity for it or wait for a job that would be more satisfying. As far as I concerned, according to reality, the advantages of the wait for a prosperous job substantially outweigh those of the get a secure job. To be more specific, no one can deny the vast effects of having a thriving job on every individual's life. Hence, I have a penchant for accepting a suitable job for some reasons, among which the issue of availability and successfully are more significant.
The first reason coming to mind to substantiate my standpoint is concerned with the issue that a job opportunity is highly depended on the situation of the country that the person is living in. To clarify this concept, when you feel the need to work for gaining money due to routine needs, then, it is not important for you that you are accepting a secure job, or you are performing a job that you are happy with especially when you have a family because you don't have ample time to seek for appropriate job due to you must require your family requirements. take a personal experience as an example, it is a long time that Iran is facing a lot of sanctions , and in these conditions, you don't have too many opportunities for working. taking into account what was already mentioned, I think we should modify our opinions and notions in different circumstances to live more comfortable.
Furthermore, another equally noteworthy point corroborating my stance is that the more satisfactory you get from your job, the more successful person you will be in the society, this fact plays a pivotal role in the community. Regarding this importance, every single person, if he\she puts efforts into doing something without satisfactory after a while, will be disappointed because he\she is fulfilling something that is forced to do, and do not enjoy it. according to my experience, when I was a child, I used to play football too much because I absolutely adored playing it, but when my examination season arrived, my family did not let me play football anymore, and they told me every day you must study instead of playing. but after a while, I got so depressed, and could not study anymore. Thereby, my family and I decided to have a precise schedule for both studying and playing, and by doing this, I would be successful in both cases. In conclusion, considering the mentioned points and examples, it is much better to accomplish a task that you are interested in order to be more successful.
To sum up, based on all argumentations stated above, one can logically draw the consequence that your decision in some specific situations such as accepting a job is depended on the circumstances of society considering the satisfactory in order to be more successful. without a shadow of doubt, it is highly recommended to fulfill whatever makes you happy according to the conditions of the society. Let’s get rid of hustle and bustle of choosing a job, or accepting a job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'mind substantiating'.
Suggestion: mind substantiating
...gnificant. The first reason coming to mind to substantiate my standpoint is concerned with the is...
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Suggestion:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ally when you have a family because you dont have ample time to seek for appropriate...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Take
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...anctions , and in these conditions, you dont have too many opportunities for working...
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...all too much because I absolutely adored playing it, but when my examination seas...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended fulfilling'.
Suggestion: recommended fulfilling
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Let's get rid of hustle and bustle of choosing a job, or accepting a job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, regarding, so, then, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2623.0 1977.66487455 133% => OK
No of words: 551.0 407.700716846 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76043557169 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84493438435 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96641345747 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 275.0 212.727598566 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.499092558984 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 855.9 618.680645161 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.0452464209 48.9658058833 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.722222222 100.406767564 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6111111111 20.6045352989 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38888888889 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366659394587 0.236089414692 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116657900963 0.076458572812 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826808798401 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225147778906 0.150856017488 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855819637786 0.0645574589148 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 58.1214874552 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.