The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
The word cooperation when broken down as 'Co' 'operation' will highlight that it implies operate together. In any walk of life an individual does not operate alone but s/he operates with other people around operating as well. cooperation should be taught to the young people of the society so that they can live and execute harmonously in this world. However, a sense of competition should also be taught to the individuals so that they continue to progress and take the world forward.
Firstly, In any field of work there are numerous people who work together and an individual need to understand to work in a group. very few work can be executed in silo. there will mostly be situation where a group of people will be working together to achieve a common goal. In order to work effectively in a group of people it is very important that an individual has a sense of cooperation. consider the example of politics where in order to pass a bill in the congress representatives of different states and parties debate and finally cooperate to pass the bill and turn it into law.
Secondly, in a group setting if an individual does not have sense of cooperation then the individual will result in hindering the work or the final outcome. this can be understood by considering the example of an obstinate team member who is not willing to accept the proposal of team leader - team leader expects the team member to work on priority items first to meet deadlines but the team member wants to work on delivering a report which is planned to be shared 3 weeks from now. this lack of cooperation from the team member will put the deliverables at risk and the team will fail to achieve the short term goal.
Finally, cooperation is not the only quality which an individual should possess to be effective in any role. sense of competitiveness is also an important factor and should be imparted to young people. it is important that a leader is competitive to take an organization forward. if the leader lacks competency then growth of the leader and the organization which the leader is leading will not be sustained and will become complacent.
To conclude, cooperation with a right balance of competitive spirit will take an individual the distance and will help the organization which is led by that individual.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Cooperation
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1922.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 400.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.805 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79910274028 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4475 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 611.1 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5872771539 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.058823529 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5294117647 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76470588235 5.21951772744 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0586722672006 0.243740707755 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0269686728597 0.0831039109588 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352769565911 0.0758088955206 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0338271860845 0.150359130593 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290036271621 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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