Some people believe that people who do physical work should be paid on par with the people who have high level degree. Do you agree or disagree? Why?
It is being assumed by various people that wages of every designation should be equal where is that doesn’t matter the post is higher or lower. Both categories of employee give their best towards their obligation at work place, whether it is mentally or physically. So, I completely agree with the statement.
Educated workers perform their duties with the use of their knowledge which they have learnt from academic institutes and provide the chances to raise the turnover by following all the rules and regulation of taxation department. To illustrate an accountant with the knowledge of basic accounting rules calculate sales and generate a report that how much a firm can increase or decrease so that they do not face any financial crisis. Hence, they take full advantage of their studies which can allow to earn smart package.
However, worker with less qualification concerned, they also do their job with full efforts so that they can pay their services in the sake of their wages. They use this body to complete the work like a sweeper clean the premises with the use of mop which require physical movement and a labor class employee lift tones of weight with the help of his arms, shoulder & backbone. Therefore, they also liable to earn good amount of money, so that they can purchase food with good nutrition’s and rejuvenate himself for the next day.
Conclusively, it is a right of every class employee to earn better because some are working with the use of their psychological power and other use their bodily.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 500, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'earning'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: earning
...antage of their studies which can allow to earn smart package. However, worker wit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99613899614 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66039048164 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6138996139 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.4058661154 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.4 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126985089482 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054312468147 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385439160458 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819896972114 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037579147508 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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