To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Firstly
...its major cities is wrong in my opinion.Firstly if one wants to know about the society ...
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Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...erence between a city and a village and thats the reason why it was easy to understan...
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Suggestion: There
...cteristics of the society in those days.There on people started and evolving,thereaft...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , thereafter
...ays.There on people started and evolving,thereafter the difference between cities and villa...
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Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: NON_ACTION_CONTINUOUS[3]
Message: The verb know is usually not used with a continuous form, use the simple form instead. Suggestion: 'knows'
Suggestion: knows
...tand the characteristics of the society is knowing the development in the villages rather ...
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Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...tand the characteristics of the society is knowing the development in the villages rather ...
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Suggestion: Many
...e villages play a vital role in society.Many people travel from villages to cities f...
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Suggestion: , this
...om villages to cities for their survival,this clearly shows that the villages are sti...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Developing
...considered as a part of the society. developing the villages means developing the socie...
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Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'villages'' or 'village's'?
Suggestion: villages'; village's
... part of the society. developing the villages means developing the society in deed.Th...
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Suggestion: The
...es means developing the society in deed.The first and foremost step is to know the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, so, still, then, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 58.6224719101 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 2235.4752809 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 187.0 442.535393258 42% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12299465241 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 4.55969084622 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25966425854 2.79657885939 117% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 215.323595506 44% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508021390374 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 704.065955056 43% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 23.0359550562 200% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.7165767847 60.3974514979 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 239.5 118.986275619 201% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.75 23.4991977007 199% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 5.21951772744 268% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269875974519 0.243740707755 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175790012404 0.0831039109588 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143506364385 0.0758088955206 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175790012404 0.150359130593 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143506364385 0.0667264976115 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.1 14.1392134831 185% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.79 48.8420337079 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 12.1743820225 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 100.480337079 26% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.8971910112 240% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 11.2143820225 182% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.

Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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