Men and women should have equal set of tasks in-spite of their physical differences.
Well, in this era of the modern world women are nowhere behind the man, they can do any kind of task as same as men, take it either technical side, physical strength or no matter what. but in contrast to the topic I would disagree that men and women should have equal task in-spite of there physical differences.Here's what running through my mind either men and women are competing or we are taking different scenarios where men and women are competed differently in their own set or we are generalizing it in terms of daily lives.so lets try to embellish each one the topics separately.
Although we know that and of course we have seen that the natural body build-up of men is slightly on the greater side than women having more of muscles , so naturally the men are bit superior than women in terms of physical strength that directly correlates with the physical difference.so if there is any kind of sport like weightlifting , men will be able to lift up more of weight but in contrast take a scenario where the sport the sport is Swimming or badminton or table tennis , will now the physical strength plays a role?Ofcourse yes, definitely but in the same scenario women cannot not only compete with men but can beat them in the particular task.it has been taught to us specially in third world countries where men is superior than women not in physical strength but in general also.This kind of things decline the mentality and directly affect the confidence of women and they start doubting themselves whether they ll be able to compete men or not. but now a days , thanks to social media the high achievements gained by women now days are being circulated every where. so naturally that gives the strength to those women who are reading that post and help them bolster their confidence .
In conclusion to the paragraph I will say that yes their should be certain kind of difference in terms of equal tasks .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, third, well, in conclusion, in contrast, in general, kind of, of course, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 337.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69732937685 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59936367494 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525222551929 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 23.0359550562 243% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 306.166076936 60.3974514979 507% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 263.833333333 118.986275619 222% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.1666666667 23.4991977007 239% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.6666666667 5.21951772744 338% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407375921397 0.243740707755 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186163310663 0.0831039109588 224% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127745911384 0.0758088955206 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282599144534 0.150359130593 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10044850853 0.0667264976115 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.8 14.1392134831 204% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 23.1 48.8420337079 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 12.1743820225 197% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.87 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 100.480337079 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 11.8971910112 227% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.4 11.2143820225 218% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 11.7820224719 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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