Men and women should have equal set of tasks in-spite of their physical differences.
Every living creature in this world is unique in its own way. Nearly all the multicellulsr organisms are classifed into two major groups, one being the bearer of life or birth, called female, and the other being the protector of that born life, called male. Generally, most of the species are female dominant i.e. a female being rules the pack, group, kingdom ahteverr the name given to it. This is clearly obvious as the female beings possess the greatest boon and far greater responsibilty of bearing the birth and taking care of it. In contrast human society is assumed to be male domminant. What if the actual case is a complete flip of the coin? The answer is a simple change of perception, humans are technologically, socially and emotionally far evolved than any other species that had thier feet on this planet. This makes us stand apart and give a new meaning to existence of life. Human society is not male dominant, although it appears to be one supeficially, it is female oriented rather than male dominant. All these rules being framed through out the generations are not meant to suppress women but they are more intended to protect them. There are few cases where some have misused these rules, but it doesn't mean that these differences are completely irrational. One can never blame a medicine as it causes harm when taken in high dosage, it is mistake of the person who used it. Simlarly, differences between the tasks to be performed by men and women are not designed to suppress any gender rather they are designed such that they suit their physical advantages. As a quote says, " Women are created to do the things that men can not do, then why women bother about the things that men do? ", both men and women have their own tasks which make them a complete human. One can never imagine a man to give a child birth. Men take the meticulous physical tasks so as to keep women safe and happy. A true man deals women as delicate as a petal of flower and thus doesn't like to give her any strain, this doesn't mean that he is suppressing her, he is protecting and taking care of her. However there are certain tasks that are equally suitable for both the genders such as social tasks which involve all the persons equally. These tasks can be shared by both the genders. Yet, women and men clearly evolved with different physical attirbutwes that fulfill different purposes, thus it is always good to chos.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: contrast,
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Suggestion:
...is assumed to be male domminant. What if the actual case is a complete flip of th...
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Suggestion: throughout
... dominant. All these rules being framed through out the generations are not meant to suppre...
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Suggestion:
...not meant to suppress women but they are more intended to protect them. There are...
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Suggestion: doesn't
...e some have misused these rules, but it doesnt mean that these differences are complet...
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Suggestion: to
... Men take the meticulous physical tasks so as to keep women safe and happy. A true man d...
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Suggestion: doesn't
... delicate as a petal of flower and thus doesnt like to give her any strain, this doesn...
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Suggestion: doesn't
...oesnt like to give her any strain, this doesnt mean that he is suppressing her, he is ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...e is protecting and taking care of her. However there are certain tasks that are equall...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, thus, as to, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1999.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 431.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63805104408 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39950495807 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54060324826 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 641.7 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5030659999 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1904761905 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5238095238 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90476190476 5.21951772744 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197917083012 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582378686956 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824804954439 0.0758088955206 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197917083012 0.150359130593 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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