To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
This claim to understand the most important charactersitics of a society, one must study its major cities is wrong according to me.Firstly if one wants to know about the society they have to look into the whole society which includes both the villages and cities in the society.
In olden days there was no difference between a city and a village and that's the reason why it was easy to understand the characteristics of the society in those days.There on people started and evolving,thereafter the difference between cities and villages arose and then it was a difficulty to understand the characteristics of the society.
Basically according to me the first step to understand the characteristics of the society is knowing the development in the villages rather than cities because villages play a vital role in society.Many people travel from villages to cities for their survival,this clearly shows that the villages are still not been considered as a part of the society.
developing the villages means developing the society in deed.The first and foremost step is to know the villages present in the society to understand the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, so, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 58.6224719101 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 2235.4752809 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 187.0 442.535393258 42% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13368983957 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 4.55969084622 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2031326712 2.79657885939 115% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 215.323595506 44% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508021390374 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 704.065955056 43% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 23.0359550562 200% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.675293194 60.3974514979 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 240.0 118.986275619 202% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.75 23.4991977007 199% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 5.21951772744 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257532227067 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162603372282 0.0831039109588 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12086697445 0.0758088955206 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162603372282 0.150359130593 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12086697445 0.0667264976115 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.1 14.1392134831 185% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.79 48.8420337079 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 12.1743820225 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 100.480337079 27% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 11.8971910112 235% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 11.2143820225 182% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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