The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.
Do you agree or disagree?
Online shopping has become a common way to purchase things range from clothes to electrical appliance. Although online shopping brings convenience to people's life, I believe that physical stores will remain its function as a shopping option.
It is true that online shopping provides people a more convenient way to buy goods with a wide variety. Without going outdoor, people can order what they want by just a few clicks on the website. It saves time for people who are busying during the week and do not want any outdoor activities on weekends. Moreover, people are able to purchase items from all over the world and have them delivered.
However, physical shops will not be replaced because of the growth of online shopping. One thing that none of the online shops could provide is the fitting room. People can try on clothes to see if the style or the size fit them, which is the biggest difference with online shopping. In addition, people can have the goods as soon as they decide to buy in store. There is no extra freight charge and no need to wait for several days for the delivery. Furthermore, for some people especially women, shopping also acts as an way to social and relax. Even window shopping could make women happy and satisfied.
To sump, though I agree that online shopping could make life easier due to the variety of goods and delivery service, I think that physical shops will still exist because of the unique shopping experience that could not obtain online.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 521, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...especially women, shopping also acts as an way to social and relax. Even window sh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, i think, in addition, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81395348837 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33536700888 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596899224806 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.565391905 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7142857143 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277967903354 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978956933807 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804818830084 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180671055423 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576423107399 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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