The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in town and cities closing .
Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays many people are shopping online around the word. It is sometime though that it lead to all shops be close in future.in my point of view it is true that online shopping is more convenient than traditional shopping but traditional shop has its importance too.
Although, people tend to shopping online because of their special offers; therefore , not only could people save more money and time but also they can compare prices with other online shops and decide for better shopping ,furthermore ,all online shops are easy access and user friendly so people prefer to shop online instead to wasting their time for buying their items in stores or shops , another factor to consider is that people with hectic life style tend to online shops so they have more opportunity to spend their time to do other subjects.
While in modern countries online shopping is common by contrast some people prefer traditional shopping as they believe that they need to see quality of items closely and make sure had the best choice both in terms of quality and price , as an example; especially for buying cloths people who don’t know their size exactly prefer to try that item and select the fit ones, although some believe that online shops has its own problems if they receive the problematic goods with poor quality then taking it back to the shops and asking for refund need time and pursuing.
In conclusion , I believe that online shop are practical and convenient moreover is beneficial in saving time and money but traditional shops has its own importance for people who are obsessive or sensitive in quality and size of items.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87725631769 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34886228589 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523465703971 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 20.2975951904 271% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 201.563290309 49.4020404114 408% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 270.2 106.682146367 253% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.4 20.7667163134 267% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.2 7.06120827912 258% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288141776371 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.19287231344 0.084324248473 229% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643065361979 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206602418269 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760668309887 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.3 13.0946893788 224% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 24.11 50.2224549098 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 11.3001002004 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 24.0 10.1190380762 237% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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