Economic progress
it is a fact that many governments consider economical developments as their most significant purpose. However, some people think that other aspects are as imperative as the economy of a country.
it is evident that economic progress is crucial for a society to sustain during the time and benefit the public. one of the constructive effects of a thrived economy is that there is an adequate amount of received salary for employed people while it has existed a logical balance between expenditures and revenues. In this way, the welfare level and satisfaction sense of life will be improved between different types of people in a country. For example, if a worker and employee can manage costs and incomes in a proper way, he will be able to meet his life's requirements to make a happy life and successful future for his family. The other positive impact of economic developments is the decreasing rate of unemployment in society and especially between youngsters. The more economic progress, the more opportunities for job seekers and graduated students. A country with a low rate of jobless and unemployed people is likely to encounter less poverty and indigence of citizens. As an instance, we can consider some developed nations where the students from the last semesters of the university are proposed to be engaged in industrial environments or even receive financial grants to continue education in upper grades.
On the other hand, there are some other aspects of governing a country which some people believe that these are also as important as economic considerations. political issues are the main concern between them. if a government can not set a beneficial and win-win relation between its neighbours and other nations, might not fix and control some problems, while losing the profitable chances. For example, imports and exports of goods are important issues for both governments and people, because they are remarkable resources of income and provide new facilities with the people who live in a country. Without an appropriate foreign politic, a government would not benefit from this big market. The other issue which has recently become one of the concerns pertains to family and social developments. there are different developed countries with an acceptable level of social welfare, who are dealing with a low and negative rate of population's increment. they need to make a plan for family extension and it is a threat for these countries that are losing endemic young labours and the elderly is increasing there.
In short, I believe that economic developments are really essential for a country to increase the satisfaction of people and other welfare facilities. I strongly believe that it can be considered as the most important issue for many governments. even though, a government has to be known in the world to make a lucrative connection between other countries. Besides it, family and social considerations should not be forgotten.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, really, so, while, as to, for example, in short, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2501.0 1615.20841683 155% => OK
No of words: 482.0 315.596192385 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1887966805 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93633483995 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491701244813 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 817.2 506.74238477 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6450373783 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.681818182 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9090909091 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136673031338 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491925817915 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0938641774827 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890252808562 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563214463265 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 78.4519038076 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.