You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have compl

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.

Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter

explain why you are writing

describe your circumstances

ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

Dear

You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir,

I am writing to let you know that I am interested in the advanced computer design course offered in your institute. I recently read about it in the local newspaper. While I possess the basic computing knowledge, I am ineligible to apply. I hope you will consider my situation favorably.

Let me explain my situation. I am an arts student without any prior formal computer degree, however I have always had immense interest in coding algorithms and programs. The trouble is that the mandatory elementary course will commence almost 3 months later to my semester break. As such, I am compelled to take up this course.

Would you kindly check if any extraordinary exception could be made to admit me? As long as I know basic computing, catching up to the advance course won't be much of a problem.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours faithfully,

Saba Azam

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 38, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'arts'' or 'art's'?
Suggestion: arts'; art's
... Let me explain my situation. I am an arts student without any prior formal comput...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, while, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 750.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 150.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86747275488 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.7 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3983808324 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.5 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246933319564 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750055290509 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064364318392 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148805910824 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486355229532 0.0580467560999 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.83 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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