The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some to tourist facilities.
The maps illustrate some changes to an island before and after it will be developed to promote tourism.
It is clear that the island will be considerably changed over the period with the instruction of accommodation areas, and tourists will have the ability to access to it.
As can be seen from the maps, two areas will be built to accommodate visitors, one of which having nine bungalows will be in the center of the island. Between the two accommodation areas, there will be a reception to welcome tourists. In addition, the restaurant to the north of the reception will be constructed to serve meals for visitors.
Turning to the other features, while palm trees almost remain unchanged the beach in the west of the island will be available for swimming. Besides, the installation of the pier on the southern coat of the island will allow sail boats to dock, and finally footpaths and vehicle tracks will be paved to link all the facilities.
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- Education for young people is important in many countries. However, the others think government should spend more money for education in adult population who can not read and write.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- The bar chart compares consumer spending on six different items in Germany, Italy, France, and Britain. 67
- The table illustrates the figure of boys in two age groups participating in 5 distinct sports in the UK in year 2000. 61
- More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in foreign countries.Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks? 78
- The pie charts illustrate the result of a research in terms of the cultural and leisure activities that boys and girls take part in. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 800.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87804878049 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71035728002 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591463414634 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9600354924 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.285714286 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166724273695 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922161420592 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931331468692 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131847657144 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108008871883 0.0819641961636 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.