Some people prefer to work for themselves or own a business, others prefer to work for an employer.Would you rather be self-employed, work for someone else, or own a business.
Few people are interested in running their own business and wanted to earn their own.
But few prefer to work under some employer. I personally prefer to be under someone else instead of working on my own. Let's see, my explanation in the passage below.
Earning through a job keeps you in a risk-free position and the growth is guaranteed if we put our full efforts. Following manager instructions without mistakes can take an employee position to a higher level quickly than expected. Working hours will be fixed which helps to upgrade ourselves in the profile we are working on. Working under someone also gives an opportunity to be with multi raced people which help to increase communication and knowledge on various topics. For example, one of my friend's working in Canada in a multinational organisation with many colleagues from various countries had given him a chance to learn many languages and learn all sorts of activities they do.
Self-employment can be very risky if something goes wrong with the ideas you implement
Hence, It is less secured on a longer perspective. A self-employed need to take care a of a lot of things and may need to sacrifice families and relationships. There also might be a need to work in the public holidays and be very attentive for every step we execute. For example, one of my friends ran a stainless-steel company of his own for more than 5 years and with the revolutionary use of plastic, all his business saw a downfall and he finally filed a bankruptcy recently to get relieved.
To conclude, even though employment created by own may yield good income, a high risk is involved and can also put under immense pressure. Working under someone will earn less, but it is pain-free and always has an option to switch over when required.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
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Line 13, column 86, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...tive. A self-employed need to take care a of a lot of things and may need to sacr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, if, may, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85714285714 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86528319405 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594155844156 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1475157244 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335654594874 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109647331682 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881295125626 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155843482007 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726177814023 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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