You ride a bicycle to work, but there is a problem with the parking. Write a letter to the manager of the Parking Management Company.Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my deep concern about the local bicycle parking behind the office centre.
As a responsible parent and respectable citizen of our city, I try to promote a healthy life-style and support ecologically friendly transport. That is why I prefer using a bicycle for travelling to work. There is only one parking equipped close to the building however the security level of that place leaves much to be desired. Unfortunately, that parking is located in the distance from the office and seems to be deserted and unavailable for CCTV. I am aware of several colleagues who had their bicycles stolen. Thus, this situation has become a burning issue for my colleagues and me. In connection with this, we would appreciate it very much if you could relocate the parking area for bicycles closer to the office, for instance, in front of the main entrance, because this place is observed by CCTV.
I hope this problem will not be ignored and the situation will change for the better.
Thank you kindly in advance.
Yours faithfully,
In your letter, you should tell:
• why you ride a bicycle to work
• what the problem is with the parking
• what your suggest are.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my deep concern about the local bicycle parking behind the office centre.
As a responsible parent and respectable citizen of our city, I try to promote a healthy life-style and support ecologically friendly transport. That is why I prefer using a bicycle for travelling to work. There is only one parking equipped close to the building however the security level of that place leaves much to be desired. Unfortunately, that parking is located in the distance from the office and seems to be deserted and unavailable for CCTV. I am aware of several colleagues who had their bicycles stolen. Thus, this situation has become a burning issue for my colleagues and me. In connection with this, we would appreciate it very much if you could relocate the parking area for bicycles closer to the office, for instance, in front of the main entrance, because this place is observed by CCTV.
I hope this problem will not be ignored and the situation will change for the better.
Thank you kindly in advance.
Yours faithfully,
Sarah Brown
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ter. Thank you kindly in advance. Yours faithfully, Sarah Brown
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 182.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01648351648 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69949701693 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.4842361221 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294039024552 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106928503666 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.180695428727 0.0667982634062 271% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204219524188 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.236406912536 0.056905535591 415% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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