You recently went shopping at the local supermarket. When you got home and noticed your bill, you found that you had been charged for items you did not purchase.
Write a letter to the supermarket manager explaining what has happened. Tell the manager how you feel about the error and tell the manager what you would like him/her to do about it.
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to raise my concern with regards to the invoice about the items I purchased from your store
Let me explain in more detail, I visited your local supermarket for purchasing some products for home. Since the cash counter was busy at that point and I was busy packing the items I did not go through the bill which was generated by the cashier and paid an amount of Rs 6000 through cash. However, after reaching home I checked the bill thoroughly, and to my surprise I realised that I have been additionally charged for a Cheese and Deodorant which I have not purchase and was not in the bag too.
I as a customer felt cheated as the clerk as charged me additional money because I was not alert at the time of checkout.
I would like you take my matter seriously and kindly reverse the extra amount charged to me as soon as possible. I am attaching the copy of invoice for your reference; my invoice number is AN6655 dated 27TH July 2019. I would also recommend you to provide proper training to you staff so that they are able to provide satisfactory services.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ut the items I purchased from your store Let me explain in more detail, I visited...
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Line 5, column 464, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'purchased'.
Suggestion: purchased
...a Cheese and Deodorant which I have not purchase and was not in the bag too. I as a cu...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 114, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ount charged to me as soon as possible. I am attaching the copy of invoice for yo...
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Line 9, column 219, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... number is AN6655 dated 27TH July 2019. I would also recommend you to provide pro...
^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ble to provide satisfactory services. I am looking forward to hearing from you ...
^
Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n. Yours faithfully, Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 980.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55813953488 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51427078866 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609302325581 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.4419539749 44.8134815571 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.888888889 76.5299724578 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8888888889 16.8248392259 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240960438736 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088852023873 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530832180566 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110123564107 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567090293467 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.